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very interesting

it ws like a combo of DBZ and matchsticks... but you dont need me to tell you that =/

i liked the magical trevor cow in the background, did you do the animation for that movie? it was a very good reproduction if you didnt.

i think it has a good idea, and its original with exception to the DBZ part of it. if you could make something with more... inspired characters, it would have been alot better in my opinion

a decent start, but...

theres alot you could improve upon. for starters, try adding a little more detail to the background, no offense, but it looks like it was drawn by a little kid. nextly, improve the sound quality a bit. just because a sound can be used, doesnt mean its THE best one. the thing i liked the least was when the banana killed the guy, the scream was... choppy, or something... like you put a keyframe in the middle of the scream and it took out one frame of the sound. another thing, this was good for random humor, but people enjoy plots much more. im not saying random humor is bad, but it doesnt go as far. lastly, your animation was kinda choppy. you can improve this by running your movies at a framerate of between 17 and 22 fps any higher is not needed and any lower is too choppy. i use 20 fps cause it devides the second up evenly. a smooth animation is often times the difference between ok ang really great.

hope these tips help, good luck.
~neogeo0823

Poison-Rat responds:

ok.. i totaly agree with the backgrounds, they were crappy.
But the plan was to make a blur effect on them, but paintshop fucked up.
When a banana is the character, the humor always get's a bit random.
about the sound: i did it in haste, thats all i have to say :9
Thank you for the advice with the framerate..

you called them a moron

because theyre speakers had static for sound? thats stupid! fyi, my speakers were staticy to. but not because it was loud. your sound is really poor quality. but then again, so is your flash. what do you have against this banana lock? you should try to be more mature in your arguments.

overall, a crappy attempt at a crappy flash thats was, in no way, amusing, quality, or usefull.

try again next time

NullZilla responds:

did you read info for movie? this movie ( http://newgrounds.com/portal/view/122467 ) was made about a year ago against me, and this is a parody of it. Also yes poor quality but that's intended because I want score to be about same as that movie there too, and so far it's only 0.1% off ;p

also about the static, on mine I hear none, really. Either I have the treble set lower then everyone else on my speakers or my $600 surround sound speakers was really worth it. also it doesn't sound staticy on my $80 headphones either.


on my computer, the sounds are pretty loud yes, but they aren't poor quality at all, they sound fine.

I could have had the sounds CD quality but the size of movie wouldn't then fit on newgrounds. sound HAS to be compressed or movie is too large.

well...

good graphics, but its just a girl walking around topless jiggling her jugs...

...woohoo...
(complete unenthusiasm)

heres wut i thought...

well, i noticed you used the car from the flash tutorials, or a very similar one. try to shy away from that if you can. also, it was way, way too short. a guy drives a car, stops, and presumably gets blown up by one of three U.F.O's. we dont even get to see an explosion. the sound was good, as well as the main menu/intro thing.

overall, i had to give it a 2/5. it had a good idea, decent quality, but it was way too short for entertainment purposes.

heres what you did right and wrong:

ok, right things:
1. very, very random, but it fit with the music
2. interesting style of animation, or was it "styles" of animation?
3. even though it was random, most just kinda seemed to flow into itself

heres what you did wrong:
1. this is the big one, you have to right click to play it. to fix this, edit the actionscript to goto and play frame 2 or whatever the movie starts on
2. the beginning thing where you had to click the buttons, very boring and noob-ish. dont do it, unless theres a funny joke. go back and look at it, it makes the movie look like its not worth seeing.
3. make the words and pics fit in the are that you put them in. they were all cut off. once again, it made it look noob-ish.

i voted a 3 on this. its was ok, but had room for massive improvement. keep trying.

lmao!

that was like if crank yankers metup with south park and got high!

it was funny, and random, and the sound was really good. i gave it a 2 in violence for the threats that were exchanged.

the graphics could have been improved a bit on the random portions. the original artwork was good, but some of the added graphics were too pixelated, like the playing cards for example.

other than that, it was really good

lmfao!

wow... just... wow...

wierd and creative, but interestingly perverted.

*gasp* bunny girls!!

ok, im gonna make a prediction...

but with my prediction im gonna make a bet. the prediction is that this will make it onto the front page. the bet is that if it does, you post an update on the authors comments section saying something to the effect of "neogeo0823 wins the bet" nothing humiliating or anything like that, just a simple one liner saying that i won the bet. just so i can have proof that i was right... (self esteem issues)
anyway, it was really good, the pills choice was hilarious! keep it up

see ya on the front page :P

i have to admit, that was well done...

but i also must say...

"some things are wrong and some things are just disturbing...
that there, was both..."

do you really think im that stupid! i know your really here to steal my secret identity and make an army of super mutants! <-(to a mirror)

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