neogeo0823's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mega the Alien]

good, but could be massively improved

first, a few annoyances:
the little scurrying bug trhings would push you until you either died or were pushed off a cliff. make them stop that. a storyline would have massively improved the game.

next, improvements:
all those little extras, the jump boots, the fire shot, make them things you find. even if you find them early in the levels, dont start out the character with them. add a puzzle aspect to the game. use the heavy boots to push down switches or something. the whole jumping on enemies thing is ok to do, but dont overuse it. nextly, for music, i would say something spacy but tranquel for the first level. change the time of day to twilight/dusk instead of daytime. i wish i could give advice for the next level, but i couldnt make it past the first (damn bug thing crawling around, pushing everywhere... *shakes angry fist*)

finally, critique:
overall, not bad for a prototype, but could be massively improved. take it back, make some changes and resubmit

[Newgrounds SIM v 1.2]

holy... mother... of... god!!

i cant belive that playing a sim of a website would be more fun than being on the site! ive already surpassed anything that ive ever done for the site and im going back to advance even more!

[Adventures of Buttlock]

holy... mother... of GOD!!!

i played forever on that ninja level, was the smallest tap away from death on the spaceship level and for what?!? to find out that ------(spoiler deleted)-------

great game! i encountered one glitch, in the ninja level, i jupmped to a platform and never landed on it. i merely floated above it. i could still move, but i couldnt jump from it, i corrected it by falling off the platform and jumping to it again. it only happened once and it wasnt too much of a problem, but you should know anyway. ;)

keep it up, great work, man, great work!

[TheAdventuresOfGuy:RPG]

i was doing so well!

i had colleced about 40 of the 50 stones needed to finish. and i had over 200 gold!

and then i ran into a spongy! the little bastard soaked up all the water in the lake in the background and squished me! i had like 21 hp to! i couldnt believe it! god what a confidence destroyer!

Starogre responds:

You shoulda saved lol! Haven't you ever seen FFA+? Lol...

[Turbo Tank]

good, but it could be better

some things you could improve:
1). add a score system
2).add powerups, like rapid fire, or shielding, or a flamethrower
3).make a storyline
4). make mini bosses. or if those big red things were the mini bosses, make them fewer, and harder (but not too hard =P)
5). more varity of enemies

over all, not bad at all for one day of work. it took me 3 weeks to do my first movie and it still sucked in my opinion. ive been working on my second one for a few months now... (shows MY level of motivation)

anyway, good job, but it couldve been much better

THEBBQ responds:

thanks for the suggestions.

go kick ass with your new game.

[IM ATTACK!!]

very funny, but annoying to

i hate how when your playing and you get a new password, you accidentaly click one of the links

someone put the passwords in a review!!

[Life of a fish]

your right

it has been done many times before, but that lizard is soo fuckin unfair!!! everytime i went to avoid its tounge, it would force me above or below it, then crush me with its body! GAHH!!

very frustrating, what i would suggest is make it so you keep your size when you "level up" and make the bosses frickin easier!

[Trapped 5]

very nice!

im a huge zelda fan and i know youve heard it, but this is ALOT like it, but with enough oringionality so it isnt like its stolen. the only thing i didnt like was how the enemies really gnged up on you sometimes, forcing you to use like 5 lives to get them off. other than that, it was great!

[The Bounce]

huh...

well, it was was cute, simple, and interesting... it kinda lacked any sorta plotline, but that only hindered it a tiny bit. the one thing i didnt like was that those red things were always directly in the way, never off to the other side.

over all, it was a fairly good thing for 6 hours of work

[Interactive Buddy v.1.01]

very good

this reminds me of one of those desktop lemmings games where you spawn little people and then burn them to death and smash them on tyour desktop!

great work!

a suggestion i have is to make them say random things and make random noises. kinda like how you have them put up those little sad face signs and the "ohmygodi'monfire!" sign. little things like grunts when theyre hit, and coughing and sputtering when you douse them with a hose, or crying and pleading when you have torture them with something for a long time.

just the sadist in me i guess, but what the hey?